Ok, so we've got the first chapter of a story, essentially. The main strength of this is the sense of mystery- you tease the player, and I want to find out what happens next. Major weakness is English- this needs thorough proofreading, as a text-based game with constant typos and spelling errors is going to put a lot of people off.
Also, if I'm playing as a character, I want to identify with him or like him. Having a grouchy character who keeps saying 'fuck' and asking unanswerable questions is fine, but he needs to be funny or likeable, or unusual with it- your protagonist just seems unpleasant.
I'd be interested to see this if you come back to it.